Turn Left.


 This story is now part of my new short story anthology, PASSERBY.

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The small white  van dropped her off with the following instructions.

“Make sure that the children turn left and head for the top of the hill.”

This was Sarah’s assignment.

The one she had been training for.

If the emergency arose, all the children were to be taken to safety.

Taken to higher ground.

Volunteers had been called for.


Sarah did, so she came forward.

When the van left she was the only adult for miles. Sarah had not been an adult for very long. She felt the weight of her assignment.

The children must make it to safety.

The corner she was on stood at a reasonable altitude but the children needed to be higher.

By the time the van had dropped her off there were children all over the place.

It was a bit of a mess.

All day long she said the same words over and over. “Turn here and head to the top of the hill. Good people will be waiting for you.”

The same words again and again.

From her elevated aspect she could see the rising water off in the distance, and every child who went past her and made the correct turn was one more saved.

This went on all day.

A continuous stream of diminutive humanity. Many holding hands, but not a lot of singing.

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Each child was carrying a small box wrapped in brown paper and tied up, rather expertly, with string. If her job had not been so important and if she had not been concentrating so hard it would have reminded Sarah of the line from that song, “and these are a few of my favourite things….’



Just as she was remembering the line, ‘….when the dog bites…’, the little white van stopped and out jumped a dog.

An Australian Shepherd, if she wasn’t mistaken, and she wasn’t.

Sarah wasn’t frightened of dogs.

The van sped off.

No instructions this time.

Sarah thought that they had probably sent her the dog to help her with her task.

She explained to the dog what she had to do and she used the sentence, ‘herd the children up the hill’, because she deduced that the dog would know what ‘herd’ meant and probably had a good idea what a hill was as well.

Dog took to the task with gusto. She loved herding stuff and in the city there were very few things that needed herding.

She had tried herding people but mostly they didn’t like it, and there was a bit of yelling and throwing of stuff. She tried bringing back the stuff that they threw but that seemed to make things worse. Next she tried cars, but they just ignored her and it got a bit dicey a few times so she packed that it.

But here, she was actually being asked to do the thing she was born to do.

She was gentle but firm and on more than one occasion she had to use her nose to make some small human keep moving.

Small humans smelt good, all ‘pockets full of sweets’ and sticky hands, and they didn’t mind if you licked some of it off.

She enjoyed that part but she tried to be professional.


It was starting to get dark and eventually the line of children dwindled down to nothing. Sarah was exhausted but Dog could have gone on a bit longer.


There was a small park on the corner which had running water from a rainwater tank and a toilet. Sarah didn’t fancy going behind a tree but Dog did not mind, but even a dog wanted a bit of privacy.

They slept together on the soft grass, but not before they ate the food that the little white van had provided.

They never saw the little white van again but next morning, at first light, the children started coming up the hill again.

Dog kept things going while Sarah washed up and used the facilities.

“Turn here and head to the top of the hill. Good people will be waiting for you.”

Days turned into a week.


Sarah and Dog survived on tank water and the contents of those little boxes wrapped in brown paper and tied up with string.

Children being children, they would occasionally drop a box and forget to pick it up.

The boxes contained a type of army field ration. Not very appetising but it was food, about enough to keep a child alive, but only just.

If you have ever had a job requiring a repetitive action you will know that after a while your body carries it out without you having to think about it and your mind can concentrate on other things.

Sarah’s mind was thinking about those little boxes tied up with string.


They didn’t look like they had been prepared by a machine so Sarah imagined a long table with ladies loading those tasteless food bars into those little boxes, wrapping then in brown paper and then expertly tying string around them and leaving that clever little bow that acted as a carry handle.

“Who taught them how to tie that bow?” Sarah thought.

Sarah also wondered why the little white van did not have any markings on it and why she wasn’t given one of those cool orange ‘fluro’ vests.

Maybe they had run out by the time they got to her. Maybe her task was not important enough.

They could at least have given the dog a vest.


Maybe they would give her a T-shirt when this was all over.


One week turned into two and Sarah could see that the water was still rising but not as fast. She was tired all the time and her clothes were very dirty.

She tried to wash them, especially her ‘smalls’, as her mum used to call them, but without soap nothing really got clean.

Sarah was not at all sure that she smelt good either, but it was hard to tell with no other adults around and she didn’t want to ask one of the never-ending line of children. Children always thought adults smelt bad, it was part of their thing.

Dog didn’t care how she smelt. All humans had their own distinctive odour, it made them easier to find in a crowd.

Dog noticed that Sarah’s odour was changing.

She was very weak and not very well. Dog worried about her as she was the leader of her pack now and she wanted her to be strong and decisive.

Sarah got weaker and the children kept coming.

There did not seem to be as many of them but they still kept coming.

 Sarah lay down next to Dog. She needed her warmth; she was very cold.


Sarah did not wake up the next morning.

Dog nudged her a few times, the way she always did but she knew it was no use.

Her leader was gone.

Dog got up, stretched, went behind her favourite tree and headed off to work.

That night Dog lay down next to Sarah and guarded her body.

It was the least she could do for such a brave pack leader.


PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS STORY IS NOW THE MIDDLE STORY IN A TRILOGY CALLED ‘And In The End You’ll Hear Me Calling.’ If you enjoyed this story you might want to find out what came before and what came after.


12 thoughts on “Turn Left.

    • Dear Ms funk,
      Thank you very much for your comments.
      I know this sounds a little strange but it affected me the same way.
      This is the first story that I have written that came entirely from a dream. Usually dreams just dissolve as I try to remember them, but this one did not want to go away. I can remember being half awake and half asleep and ‘writing’ the story as it unfolded. I felt sure that I would forget it all when I woke up but there it was. This all happened on a Saturday morning so I did not have the luxury of waking up and frantically writing it down as my wife was sitting next to me in bed and she loves to tell and show me stuff. I explained about the dream and she tried very hard to be silent while I got it all down.
      Even though some of my stuff is a bit ‘out there’ I don’t actively write semi sci-fi, so I was a little surprised by this story.
      The part with the dog came after I woke and began to write.
      When I had finished I REALLY wanted my wife to ask me to read it to her………. she didn’t. She was lost in her own world that day, and that’s OK. We all need to decompress after a rough week. We had an excellent weekend with our son and his girlfriend and all our dogs but I kept hoping my wife would ask about this story. She follows my stuff so hopefully she will read it soon.
      As for you…………. I’m not sure whether to apologise for upsetting you or be glad that you were moved by it. You choose.


      • Dear Terry,
        I am glad to be moved. I am afraid your story did not feel like science fiction to me, instead it felt prophetic – especially so since it was a dream. Sea levels rise incrementally. Most of us live on coasts. Eventually delayed choices will make for difficult situations. (This is part of what I study professionally.) I hope the kids and the dog in the story make it.
        Best wishes,


        • I live on one of the highest points close to Melbourne, so I guess it will be my hill they will be coming up!
          Fear not though……. it ain’t happened till it’s happened and as a species we have a habit of pulling back from the brink, just in time. Also, I have great faith in this tiny planet. I think it has a lot more sense than we do and if necessary it will tip us all off if it needs to for survival. No biggie……. we learn or we disappear.
          You sound like your work is at the cutting edge of all this stuff. Don’t let it get you down.


  1. That was a hero left unsung..many came and left they turned..so many children and no adult in sight..Sarah how did you manage to sleep at night..that is when you decided to drift away..but your responsibility ..who would take care..yes the faithful fur is ready to do..what the leader couldn’t..the savior will as due.


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