How could you not love a guy who would willingly die for you and not ask why?
I knew Knuckles from back in the day.
I put him away for eighteen months, but he never held it against me. “It was a fair cop, and yous was nice to me, called me by name, and never held it against me cos I was dumb.”
My wife inherited a conglomerate and enough money to buy heaven, or at least the place next door, and I came along to help her hang on to some of it. There’s a lot of sharks out there, and they aren’t all swimming in Port Phillip Bay.
Being rich means that you get invited to lots of charity dos.
I like dressing up, and so does Scarlett. She looks amazing in her ‘get them to donate’ clothes. She’s a smidgen under five feet tall, but no one seems to notice. Some people are taller than their height.
Whenever we are out doing the high society thing Knuckles is never far away. He thinks Scarlett is an angel, a sentiment I tend to share.
Some moron decided to make a name for himself by knocking off the State Premier, and Scarlett got into the line of fire.
Knuckles stepped in front of the bullet like he was taking a stroll in the park —- he never hesitated —— he saw it coming and just took it.
The Premier came to see him in hospital and when he was well enough they put on a civic reception.
Knuckles is an honest sort of guy for a career criminal, and he felt guilty for taking the credit. When the Premier found out that Knuckles was close to being homeless, he pulled a few strings and got him a government apartment rent free, for life.
Knuckles opened his mouth to say that he was just protecting ‘his’ Scarlett. I rather rudely interrupted him and told the Premier how pleased my friend was and that he was still weak so I would be answering questions for him. Knuckles just looked a bit bewildered but being a pleasant fellow he did not want to contradict me.
Knuckles generally looked like he had borrowed someone else’s skin for the day, and it didn’t quite fit, and on this occasion, standing on stage in front of all those people and all those cameras, Knuckles looked decidedly uncomfortable.
He needn’t have; this was his day.
He saved Scarlett, and he deserved his moment in the sun.
How could you not love a guy who would take a bullet and not expect any thanks?
Written and entered into two competitions…… top four finish means publication…….. if not I’ll publish the bloody thing myself…… second one also underway.
Thank you for thinking that I’m capable of it!
Glad you enjoyed this one.
Terry
That was delightful bit, Terry. I love this phrase: “Knuckles generally looked like he had borrowed someone else’s skin for the day, and it didn’t quite fit … ” Best of luck on the contest!
Terry, have you looked into the short fiction market in magazines, print & otherwise? I found a great overview website that includes many that may be of interest (crimestalkers.com, TTA PRess’ Crimewave, overmydeadbody.com). Check out http://www.thrillingdetective.com/trivia/digests2.html for more ideas. I think your particular combo of mystery/humor and strong payoff could work for a publication looking for short punchy work. Wish you the best of luck!!!
Wow. Thank you for that. You are very kind to think of me. I will certainly check those people out.
May your God bless you for being so thoughtful.
Terry
Spent a big chunk of yesterday sifting through all those links…… lots of fun…….. sent off a couple of stories. Thanks again……. you’ve inspired me.
Terry
Brilliant imagination matched by a spectacular turn of phrase. Scintillating as always Terry. But when are you going to treat us to a novel???
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Written and entered into two competitions…… top four finish means publication…….. if not I’ll publish the bloody thing myself…… second one also underway.
Thank you for thinking that I’m capable of it!
Glad you enjoyed this one.
Terry
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Best of luck – got my fingers and toes crossed for you – working on Monty’s now!! : ))))
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I look forward to reading Monty’s
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Uh, no… I meant… crossing Monty’s fingers and toes for you… it took quite a while as they kept coming uncrossed and he wasn’t entirely cooperative…
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sounds like a difficult assignment, and I appreciate the effort
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Loved your writing Terry.
We are also waiting for a novel.
Rhonda
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Hi RJ. I’ll reserve a copy for you guys.
Thank you for your kind words. My best to the big guy.
Terry
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great work. 🙂
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Thank you very much. I’m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Terry
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That was delightful bit, Terry. I love this phrase: “Knuckles generally looked like he had borrowed someone else’s skin for the day, and it didn’t quite fit … ” Best of luck on the contest!
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Thank you……….I’m going to need it.
Terry
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Love it! Droll humour. Hits the spot.
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You are very kind. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Terry
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Terry, have you looked into the short fiction market in magazines, print & otherwise? I found a great overview website that includes many that may be of interest (crimestalkers.com, TTA PRess’ Crimewave, overmydeadbody.com). Check out http://www.thrillingdetective.com/trivia/digests2.html for more ideas. I think your particular combo of mystery/humor and strong payoff could work for a publication looking for short punchy work. Wish you the best of luck!!!
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Wow. Thank you for that. You are very kind to think of me. I will certainly check those people out.
May your God bless you for being so thoughtful.
Terry
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I’ll take all the blessings I can get, for sure! 🙂 But, really, it’s always a pleasure to help fellow artists in whatever small way! Good luck!
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Spent a big chunk of yesterday sifting through all those links…… lots of fun…….. sent off a couple of stories. Thanks again……. you’ve inspired me.
Terry
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OK, you’ve counter-inspired me–gotta do some work on my own stuff this week, too. Fingers crossed all around!!!
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