It was a weekday and my mistress was hard at work writing her latest murder mystery.
When she writes like that I know that I can be gone for a while and she won’t miss me.
I saw the big van pull up and two large humans were carrying big pieces of furniture into the house. There were to be two humans living there, but on this day I only saw the one.
She was pretty, for a human, and she stopped what she was doing just to say hello to me. I knew straight away that she was one of the good ones.
She told me that she had a dog, but I could not smell him anywhere around.
She looked at me and said, “No he’s not here now, but I’m going to collect him tonight.”
There was something about the way she said ‘collect him’ that made me curious.
Sure enough, the next day there he was.
He looked terrible and he barely had enough strength to talk to me but over the next few weeks, as he got stronger, he told me his story, and how he came to be living with these kind humans.
I could tell you about it, but how about I let him tell it, he does it so much better than I……………
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The opening was well done and definitely set a nice tone for the story, with a fun voice.
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Thank you E.B. Glad you had fun with the story, and I’m pleased that you took the time to say so.
Terry
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I was very moved…
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Thanks Bruce, a compliment indeed.
Terry
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Such a clever tale made richer by the dogs perspective. Clever writing if I may say so 🙂
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Thank you Peter, and yes, you may say so any time you feel like it.
Terry
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That had me in tears! We all need a ‘Sally” in our lives.
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Thank you quiall, and ain’t that the truth!
Terry
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I’ve always liked a woman with a stout set of bolt cutters.
I’ve said it before, my friend. you should be writing kids’ books.
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I’m working on it, and so is Rufus. Between the two of us there will be.
Not sure what age group my stuff falls into though……… not to worry……. get it written first, worry about that later.
Thanks for the encouragement.
Terry
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That first line is one of the best of read in a long time. Extra compelling!
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Should be “I’ve” read. Sorry.
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Sorry again, (sigh)-this comment was meant for “I’m not that good at breathing in”. Not that THIS story isn’t terrific as well:)
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No worries, I’ll take the compliments wherever and whenever I can get them……… lol
I’m glad that you enjoyed both stories.
Terry
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I read this twice and am so glad I reread. Somehow, the first time, I missed the intro, where Sally saves that wonderful dog. What a good story.
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Thank you Jacqui.
I’m glad that you enjoyed the story….. it was a lot of fun to write.
Terry
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